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Monday, February 18, 2019

My 10 wishes


Jordans 10 wishes

  • Red Lamborghini
  • Play Fortnite at home
  • A giant Pichu
  • Eat Pizza after school everyday
  • Wear mufti everyday
  • Big rainbow BMX bike
  • Have a Pet Pig called Lightning
  • Eat KFC everyday for dinner
  • Go to Queenstown
  • Swim at the Beach
  • Go to Africa to see snakes, lions and tigers.

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5 comments:

  1. Eugene BecconsallMarch 27, 2019 at 1:39 PM

    Hi, my name is Eugene.
    I like the way you spelt most words correctly.
    This reminded me of a list I have made of my favourite things.
    Next time you could add some detail to your sentences.
    Why do you want to see snakes in Africa?

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  2. AshlyJuly 22, 2019 at 1:18 PM

    I really liked your 10 wishes and it kind of funny how you want to eat pizza everyday after school, to improve you can add coloring to the background and why you want a pet pig and why you want it to be named lighting.

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  3. JordanAugust 29, 2019 at 11:18 AM

    been firend

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2019 at 2:26 PM

    Tigers do not live in Africa. Bye

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  5. AnonymousOctober 29, 2019 at 2:28 PM

    hi jordan brock here i really liked your 10 wishes good job

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