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Thursday, June 10, 2021

Caught in the storm

 

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9 comments:

  1. HarryJune 10, 2021 at 10:45 AM

    You made everything cool.
    I did one of those to.
    Next time you can add nothing else because I think it's just so cool.

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  2. OliverJune 15, 2021 at 10:36 AM

    Hello Jordan,
    Since your in my class I know how you act and I know what you can and can't do so I think this little piece of writing is quite good. I'm glad you made some words colored because that was what made me interested in this blog post. Maybe add some more sentences to your story's next time.

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  3. LucaJune 15, 2021 at 10:48 AM

    Kia Ora Jordan,
    You did a mean job on this.
    What are the different colour highlights for?
    Did you wright this?
    Have a good one,
    Luca

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  4. TamaJune 21, 2021 at 9:16 AM

    Kia Ora Jordan
    I liked you caught in the storm story you did some great sentences it was wonderful. I loved your boat backround becasue you did your work about the boat. Next time do why you did it.
    From Tama.

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  5. koryJune 21, 2021 at 1:42 PM

    Hello Jordan,
    Since your in my class I know how you act and I know what you can and i like the witing

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  6. kayneAugust 17, 2021 at 9:39 AM

    Kia ora Jordan I liked how you tried to put a lot of detail into this but it could use some better grammar
    did u enjoy making this?
    how do u feel about your end product?

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  7. EmmaAugust 20, 2021 at 10:20 AM

    Hello Jordan, I really like the story that you have wrote and how you even added a picture. Why did you highlight some of the words?
    Maybe next time you could add a description on why you made this story and why you colored some of the words.
    Have a great day
    -Emma

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  8. LilySeptember 13, 2021 at 2:16 PM

    Hello Jordan, I really like the story that you have wrote and how you even added a picture. Why did you highlight some of the words?
    Maybe next time you could add a description on why you made this story and why you colored some of the words.
    Have a great day
    -Lily

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