Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Friday, March 26, 2021
Camp
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia Ora Jordan
ReplyDeleteI like the way you added some pictures about you mountain biking.
Maybe next time you could add a background and add some more writing.You could say what you did how it was if you had fun.
Overall I think you did a really good job.
Nice job Jordan. I like how you added pictures. I went to camp too. Maybe next time you could say more about what you did. What was your favorite part of the track? Keep up the good work, bye.
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