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Friday, March 26, 2021

Camp


On camp I like how we liked bike riding with my friend. I like how we went to camp and we don't do  mountain biking 

 

2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Jordan
    I like the way you added some pictures about you mountain biking.
    Maybe next time you could add a background and add some more writing.You could say what you did how it was if you had fun.
    Overall I think you did a really good job.

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  2. Nice job Jordan. I like how you added pictures. I went to camp too. Maybe next time you could say more about what you did. What was your favorite part of the track? Keep up the good work, bye.

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