Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Wednesday, April 7, 2021
7 comments:
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
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hi my name is is lily good work bf
ReplyDeleteHey Jordan I loved sailing.
ReplyDeleteCory and Trinity seemed to be on your team which is pretty good
Which boat number did you have?
Kia ora jordan sailing was really fun maybe you could add some more things you did on the trip
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Jordan
ReplyDeleteYou did a relly good job on your pictures and your writing. My favorite slide was the last one because it had every one in the photo. Next time you could put some more slides in to it.
Was this fun?
Did you like it?
From Tama.
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Jordan,
ReplyDeleteI like how you added a picture to your post.
Maybe next time you could add a blurb or reread your post to make sure that you use capitals properly.
Kind regards
Emma
hello Jordan, this is an amazing post because of how creative it is, this reminds me of the time I had to wiggle the paddle on the boat to actually move. Maybe next time you could add some text on the blog post to describe what the post is about. I look forward to seing your next post.
ReplyDeleteBYE