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Wednesday, April 7, 2021

MY sailing

 

7 comments:

  1. hi my name is is lily good work bf

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  2. Hey Jordan I loved sailing.
    Cory and Trinity seemed to be on your team which is pretty good
    Which boat number did you have?

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  3. Kia ora jordan sailing was really fun maybe you could add some more things you did on the trip

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  4. Kia Ora Jordan
    You did a relly good job on your pictures and your writing. My favorite slide was the last one because it had every one in the photo. Next time you could put some more slides in to it.
    Was this fun?
    Did you like it?
    From Tama.

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  6. Kia Ora Jordan,
    I like how you added a picture to your post.
    Maybe next time you could add a blurb or reread your post to make sure that you use capitals properly.
    Kind regards
    Emma

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  7. hello Jordan, this is an amazing post because of how creative it is, this reminds me of the time I had to wiggle the paddle on the boat to actually move. Maybe next time you could add some text on the blog post to describe what the post is about. I look forward to seing your next post.
    BYE

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