Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Thursday, June 10, 2021
9 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
You made everything cool.
ReplyDeleteI did one of those to.
Next time you can add nothing else because I think it's just so cool.
Hello Jordan,
ReplyDeleteSince your in my class I know how you act and I know what you can and can't do so I think this little piece of writing is quite good. I'm glad you made some words colored because that was what made me interested in this blog post. Maybe add some more sentences to your story's next time.
Kia Ora Jordan,
ReplyDeleteYou did a mean job on this.
What are the different colour highlights for?
Did you wright this?
Have a good one,
Luca
Kia Ora Jordan
ReplyDeleteI liked you caught in the storm story you did some great sentences it was wonderful. I loved your boat backround becasue you did your work about the boat. Next time do why you did it.
From Tama.
Hello Jordan,
ReplyDeleteSince your in my class I know how you act and I know what you can and i like the witing
Kia ora Jordan I liked how you tried to put a lot of detail into this but it could use some better grammar
ReplyDeletedid u enjoy making this?
how do u feel about your end product?
Hello Jordan, I really like the story that you have wrote and how you even added a picture. Why did you highlight some of the words?
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could add a description on why you made this story and why you colored some of the words.
Have a great day
-Emma
Hello Jordan, I really like the story that you have wrote and how you even added a picture. Why did you highlight some of the words?
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could add a description on why you made this story and why you colored some of the words.
Have a great day
-Lily
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Why u copy and paste emmas?????
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